These are raw files of the photographs that I thought might have a place in the book, but have decided to omit for various reasons. I want to show the image that just didn’t make it, because i thought they were too redundant or didn’t fit in my sequence for various reasons or vague feelings. Do you have any opinions about these photographs? Then maybe if you do like one of these photographs, perhaps suggest where a photograph should be considered in the sequence laid out in my previous post.
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starred ones I think would really help break up some of the pacing issues I was seeing. Other ones I think would help break of the visual space / closeness of many of the pics.